- The second sentence of Elteryn of Firsthold's Moridunon description is awkwardly phrased and should be rewritten to something like: "It is home to the city of Firsthold, the first city that Aldmeri High Lord Torinaan built through magic and sweat, and Skywatch, the intimidating kingdom whose battles with the Valenwood Isles are as legendary as they are shameful." The word "intimidating" is also a little odd in this context and could maybe be replaced by "forboding" or similar.
Ingame she names the cave but in the journal it is not named which makes it hard if you later forgott the name and cant look it up anymore. Would be better if the journal names the name in that entry.
