Her greeting is: "Welcome to the Moth and Tiger inn, citizen! I am Valia Vautere, publican of this establishment. We rent beds, and I have a variety of foods and wines for sale. If you're new to Old Ebonheart, I can also tell you where to look for other services, or a specific place nearby. If you're looking for someone in particular, I may be able to help." Specifically, the "looking for" has a double space between it that stands out.
The first time you ask her about Bildam Danoran, she says: "Something's wrong with him, something magical. Whenever I go to the Imperial Cult, they just tell me to pray more and give them a tithe, and maybe they'll look into it. What bull! I know I may just look like a simple guard to Arquebald, but I know enough of [sic] about the gods and magic to know this wasn't any work of the divine. Someone's gone and tampered with my brother's mind." The "of" should be removed.
Amelphia Tarramon, the first quest giver at the Mages Guild in Old Ebonheart, has the duties topic before you become a member of the Mages Guild. She says: "I think I might have something you can do. I've been experimenting with some alchemical ingredients that you can only find on the mainland of Morrowind, and I've run out of three of them. You could help replenish my stores." This doesn't actually let you start the quest, but it's definitely a line that shouldn't be said without membership.
One of her greetings is: "This the Perfect Quarrel. I am the shopkeeper Jassta Nivellus, and, by Zenithar, have I got just the thing you need, citizen -- the Colovian siegebreaker arbalest." Should say "This is the".
She has this line when you ask about House Hlaalu: "Have you traveled much in House Hlaalu territory, either on the mainland or in Vvardenfell? I absolutely adore Suran. It truly is the jewel of the Arcadian Isles [sic]. I'm thinking of renting a summer home there." Should be Ascadian Isles.
