When talking about the "recent break-in", Nelvel says, "It seems that when they were moving one of the more heavier Dwemer apparatuses our criminal masterminds accidentally dropped it." The phrase "More heavier" should be fixed, and there should be a comma after apparatuses.
Also, he later says, "500 septims take it or leave it." Another comma should be after the "septims" here.
There are a few other similar mistakes (a comma too many or too few, double spaces where they shouldn't be, etc.).
After the Dark Brotherhood attacked me, I talked to a guard on the mainland and was told to visit Firewatch. However, the journal entry told me to visit Apelles Matius in Ebonheart, as in the vanilla game.
Hamal in Hamal's Redguard Goods in Old Ebonheart is wearing the ridiculously OP vanilla heavy leather boots (armor rating of 50). He should wear the T_D version instead, called T_Imp_ColFur_Boots_01
12/18/2018 (21:59) TR_Mainland.esm 1/1/2004 (00:13) abot TR_m3_Unesa Sadrathi00000000 Aanthirin Region (7,-20) 59618 -157112 831 "she thinks to be in Almas Thirr IIRC on local area topic" 12/19/2018 (00:48) TR_Mainland.esm 1/1/2004 (00:13) abot T_Imp_Furn_RugRoundBigXp_01 Old Ebonheart, The Mother Alessia 5608 3361 15488 "move it up"
topic orders for NPC TR_m3_Foedius Locutius is apperaring when it should not even if TR_m3_FG_OE_Cursing quest is not yet started (I think it should be filtered also for TR_m3_FG_OE_Cursing >= 20)