For the Dead Pilgrim quest, the Letter to Sadryn needs a small revision. I used "with all my heart" twice, and I feel this negatively impacts the readability of the letter. My solution was to simply remove "with all my heart" from the second instance, in the second to last sentence of the letter.
[Requires the book to be reviewed. Use a placeholder item until it's merged.]
Obtain a copy of Nature of Fire for the Monastery from a monk Tolvone Noren in Vhul Temple (buy / persuade / kill / pickpocket), discuss its meaning with the questgiver.
Fixed the mentioned issues. Also gave all other objects in the cell a quick check, and moved a fork and two marshmerrows that were hidden within the bookshelf as well as a bottle on the desk that was a bit close to the edge.
A claim to finish and detail the lakebed of Lake Coronati. Keep the dreugh citadel already present in roughly the same location, although you are free to overhaul it.
This will use the merge-to-master workflow, so just create an .esp to modify TR_Narsis.esm (also load TR_Mainland.esm, ofc).
Needs Work The transition to the lower level does not line up with how other towers are, which needs fixing, in addition this needs the de_m furniture update to beds, Hlaalu tapestries and riverguard armor added, just a general update.
Needs work One of the two “burial” cells should be cut, and the burial aspect of the remaining one should be well shown. The number of mummies is very low. Needs some rocks culled as well.