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'The Origin of Vampires' Spelling/grammar issues

The book 'The Origin of Vampires' contains a few spelling errors. It also contains some run on sentences and excessive comma usage, for example:

"Given this, vampires might have been the intended inhabitants of the Arenal trap and a mockery of our ancestors: undying predators that would live in an ever-shifting environment, consumed by their one base desire, eternally trapped in conflict, forever lesser than those that died to create them, killing and killing and killing to the endless laughter of a mad god."

 

Typos in Brazen Maiden Quest

When Senillos Tulnus tells the PC about the Brazen Maiden at the top of the beacon, the first sentence has a typo. "...claims that it was damaged on the passage south from Althoa because the she couldn't see this fire here". It should be "she couldn't see", not "the she couldn't see".

In the "Brazen Maiden" topic for Bidisi Vidryon, "Winterhold" is spelled as "Wnterhold" without the "i".

 

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